Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Mr Monarch

A beautiful butterfly passes me by.
I see its bright colours Flashing out in the sky.
dancing through the trees your wings on fire .
I try to touch you.
But you just fly higher.
Please Mr Monarch come down and play.
I reach out to you But you fly fly away.


  1. Hi, my name is Catherine and I am a student of EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I love this poem about the butterfly. Butterflies are fun to watch because you see so many different species. Enjoy the butterflies!

  2. Hi Jessica,
    I am reading your blog with Antonia and Zion and we think your poem sounded beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words. Antonia thinks it is COOL!
    We might go outside now to look for butterflies flying with their" bright colours Flashing out in the sky'.

  3. Hi Jessica
    I like the picture of the butterfly because it has different colours.You use beautiful words.

  4. Jessica - I love your poem! So lovely. I can remember wanting a butterfly to stay around for me to watch too. However - they need to move on and never seem to hang around long enough. They are such beautiful creatures. Good writing Jessica!
    Mrs Tele'a


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